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Bubble Genie Rose

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This is another one of my bubbles genies and her name is Bubble Genie Rose, She really different from other genies that lives in the bottle but this time in the bubble:D

Comment or Critique on how you like my Bubble Genie Rose because this is my newest bubble genie:D
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
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Hi there! I hope you will find my critique fair and reasonable.
At first glance the artwork really pops with the heavy contrast and grabs the eye, it makes you want to click on it. Which is always a good thing. ^^ The idea is very cute and charming and I've never seen the same idea on the site before so kudos. The color scheme itself is nice, I like the idea of the purples and pinks. However the shading doesn't flatter your color choices. Avoid shading de-saturated colors with heavy amounts of black, it will really bring out the best of your drawings. I also would suggest practicing your line work to help smooth out those lines for a crisp clean look. The shading on the bubble looks really nice, giving it the effect of being transparent and I really like how you didn't line the bubble in black. Over all good work, and keep practicing!