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Gift for jasmin32001

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This is a gift for :iconjasmin32001:, I ask her if I can draw a picture for her and she says yes so  here it is:D

Hope you like it:D 

This OC belongs to:  :iconjasmin32001:

Art by Me: :icondsargentx:
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Hi ^w^

The lineart here is really well drawn.I like the pose and how you shaped the fingers.

The main thing i wanted to discuss is the shading on the hair again. It seems a bit too fuzzy or "soft grained" for silky hair. What you can try is making the shading sharper with pointed edges the disappear into other sections of hair to make it look more realistic while keeping the digital anime type feel. I like the color choice on the shade though, really compliments the hair color. Maybe adding a shine streak would give it more volume though.

I like how you make the character stand out against the background. The pink contrasts the character extremely well. I am in love with the lighting on the earrings, superb. if you adding that kind of light to the rest of the piece it would tie everything in and make it look spectacular.

again, job well done <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>